[MAP] Hag (Bar ja tako mislim)

Započeo Vitez El arambasa, Oktobar 01, 2012, 16:24:24 POSLE PODNE

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Naziv rada: Hag (zatvor)
Vrijeme rada: 20 minuta
Kod(objekti):  dole ce biti
Vozila: 0
Komentar: Moja mapa :) pocetnik sam u mapanju

Video :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0j3naGRCdWQ&feature=youtu.be

Objekti :
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CreateObject(2607,1512.90002441,-1557.40002441,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(polce_desk2) (3)
CreateObject(2607,1514.80004883,-1557.40002441,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(polce_desk2) (4)
CreateObject(2607,1516.69995117,-1558.19995117,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(polce_desk2) (5)
CreateObject(2607,1518.59997559,-1559.00000000,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(polce_desk2) (6)
CreateObject(2607,1520.50000000,-1559.00000000,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(polce_desk2) (7)
CreateObject(2607,1522.40002441,-1558.19995117,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(polce_desk2) (8)
CreateObject(2607,1524.30004883,-1557.40002441,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(polce_desk2) (9)
CreateObject(2607,1526.19995117,-1557.40002441,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(polce_desk2) (10)
CreateObject(2636,1518.59997559,-1558.19995117,23.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,90.00000000); //object(cj_pizza_chair) (1)
CreateObject(2636,1520.50000000,-1558.30004883,23.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,90.00000000); //object(cj_pizza_chair) (2)
CreateObject(2636,1514.80004883,-1556.69995117,23.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,90.00000000); //object(cj_pizza_chair) (3)
CreateObject(2636,1516.69995117,-1557.40002441,23.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,90.00000000); //object(cj_pizza_chair) (4)
CreateObject(2636,1513.00000000,-1556.69995117,23.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,90.00000000); //object(cj_pizza_chair) (5)
CreateObject(2636,1526.19995117,-1556.69995117,23.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,90.00000000); //object(cj_pizza_chair) (6)
CreateObject(2636,1524.30004883,-1556.69995117,23.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,90.00000000); //object(cj_pizza_chair) (7)
CreateObject(2636,1522.40002441,-1557.50000000,23.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,90.00000000); //object(cj_pizza_chair) (8)
CreateObject(2724,1523.90002441,-1565.00000000,23.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,180.00000000); //object(lm_stripchair) (1)
CreateObject(2607,1511.00000000,-1557.39941406,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(polce_desk2) (11)
CreateObject(2607,1513.40002441,-1564.00000000,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,179.99450684); //object(polce_desk2) (12)
CreateObject(2724,1511.39941406,-1564.69921875,23.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,179.99450684); //object(lm_stripchair) (2)
CreateObject(2607,1523.90002441,-1564.09997559,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,179.99450684); //object(polce_desk2) (13)
CreateObject(2607,1522.00000000,-1564.09997559,22.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,179.99450684); //object(polce_desk2) (14)
CreateObject(2724,1513.39941406,-1564.69921875,23.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,179.99450684); //object(lm_stripchair) (3)
CreateObject(2724,1522.00000000,-1564.90002441,23.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,179.99450684); //object(lm_stripchair) (4)
CreateObject(3383,1527.80004883,-1571.09997559,22.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,90.00000000); //object(a51_labtable1_) (1)
CreateObject(3383,1527.79980469,-1571.09960938,22.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,90.00000000); //object(a51_labtable1_) (2)
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CreateObject(3095,1524.50000000,-1574.30004883,27.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (1)
CreateObject(3095,1524.50000000,-1565.50000000,27.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (2)
CreateObject(3095,1524.50000000,-1556.90002441,27.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (3)
CreateObject(3095,1515.90002441,-1556.00000000,27.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (4)
CreateObject(3095,1508.09997559,-1556.00000000,27.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (5)
CreateObject(3095,1512.00000000,-1563.30004883,27.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (6)
CreateObject(3095,1512.00000000,-1571.09997559,27.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (7)
CreateObject(3095,1512.00000000,-1574.30004883,27.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (8)
CreateObject(3095,1515.90002441,-1574.50000000,27.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (9)
CreateObject(3095,1517.69995117,-1566.30004883,27.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (10)
CreateObject(3095,1518.59997559,-1564.09997559,27.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(a51_jetdoor) (11)
CreateObject(3095,1511.00000000,-1578.39941406,23.50000000,0.00000000,90.00000000,89.99993896); //object(a51_jetdoor) (12)
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CreateObject(3089,1515.50000000,-1578.39941406,23.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(ab_casdorlok) (2)
CreateObject(3089,1518.50000000,-1578.40002441,26.60000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(ab_casdorlok) (3)
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CreateObject(3089,1518.50000000,-1578.39941406,23.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(ab_casdorlok) (5)
CreateObject(3089,1517.00000000,-1578.40002441,26.60000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(ab_casdorlok) (6)


meni se iskreno nesvidja mapa :(
Zbog truda cu ti dati 6/10
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Trud i samo trud ;) 7/10


"Religija je samo iluzorno sunce koje se kreće oko čovjeka dotle dok se on ne kreće oko sebe samoga." - Karl Marx


"Nije glu.p onaj koji nezna da cita, nego onaj koji povjeruje u sve sto procita." - Ivo Andrić

Hvala svima na ocenama , podrudicu se vise ali naviko sam na Map editor pa mi MTA losija strana , hag nisam gledao na netu , ovo sam ja po mom mislenju uradio ipak hvala sto si mi rekao . Pozdrav svima




Citat: [BB]Eagle poslato Oktobar 01, 2012, 16:44:12 POSLE PODNE
Mapa je previse losa , na zidovima prozori i fasada , nista nije poplocano , objekti se preklapaju i nisu precizni.
Moja ocena je 4/10. :)



Kad bih ponovo mogao da biram...al' nemozes da biras.
Zajebes jedan minus i ode ceo zadatak u kurac. Ceo fazon brate, nema druge sanse.

Nije nesto mapa posto si pocetnik 8/10

Mike Downhill × Scripter & PHP Developer × Balkan Ultimate Head Admin

Respect Vegas, Chris, Dude

Pravo da ti kazem nije nesta ali pohvala za trud!
7/10



Pocetnik si pa nije lose, al bilo bi puno bolje da si napisa Trivette-u svaka dala, sigurno bi bile bolje ocjene. :P
[Spamer na dužnosti! Ne ometaj!]

Za pocetnika ovo mi se jako svidja, sjecam se kad sam ja prvu mapu editao, pa jbt objekt od objekta po deset metara xD Svaka cast samo nastavi i trudi se...

Evo ocjena 8/10